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Tuesday 22 August 2017

A Blank Canvas | Writing


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  Alien 👽Invasion
For Writing we were given a task to create an image to fill in a Blank Canvas, then write two paragraphs with Complex+Compound Sentences, my image is inspired by an alien invasion.
What I found hard:Thinking what to write about
What I found easy:Making the image
What I could do next:Make my own alien, people etc.


Draft Introduction:
People say in the future Aliens will invade Planet Earth and destroy the Human race, some of them disagreed.There are a  lot of videos about seeing UFO/ Aliens but scientist have no scientific proof they are real.

Draft Paragraph 1:
It was a cheerful morning at New York the sun was scorching,workers went to work and children went school but then a flying saucer crashed out of nowhere at central park.Citizens shriek and rush for safety, police arrived investigating the Flying Saucer but then the hatchet opened.A big headed creature slowly creeped out,it was an alien he telling something in a different language the police were confused.The head of the police called alien experts to meet at Central Park, they all arrived at the same time they were so excited to see the alien+Flying Saucer.They looked around the saucer, the alien was calm he wasn’t trying to attack the experts.


One week later the expert send the flying saucer and the alien to a secret base where they can study the alien.Scientist were doing experiments then they heard a loud bang,the officer told them to calm down and took off to see what happen.he let out a gasp there was three aliens holding laser guns standing right front of him,one of the aliens pointed the gun at the officer and pulled the trigger,the officer turned into ashes...They looked at the pile of ashes and nodded at each other and went to the room where they kept the alien,when they got there they saw a group S.W.A.T guarding the door.One of the S.W.A.T looked at the aliens then  yelled “FIRE” Bullet hissing in each direction everywhere the  aliens go,one of the aliens point its laser gun on one the S.W.A.T and pulled the trigger the S.W.A.T was too late he turned into a pile of ashes...

Will the Aliens succeed to destroy  planet Earth?

To be continued...











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