First Day Of High School
It was my first day of high school,I thanked the bus driver and hopped off the bus. my hands started to shake and I began to breath heavily, so I started to fidget with my blazer. I Slowly walked to class, not making eye contact with other students. I arrived to my first class, the bell rang right in time,and I decided to sit at the back of the class.
W.A.L.T... Use Show Not Tell
This week we used show not tell in our writing. We chose a feeling an used show not tell to explain that feeling.
What did you infer from reading my writing?
What I found easy: Thinking of a feeling
What I found hard: Writing it without telling what the feeling is
What I could do next time: Add more sentences
